This poem creates contradictory feelings which one could argue in different ways.."Sinnasee waetunu kandulu viyalee giyapasu..susumak ithiri wuuye aei..?" This laugh has not been real..if it is real, how can there be a " Susumak" at the end... Laugh at the lover.. laugh at oneself.. laugh at the detiny...? whatever, I found something new and something hidden in this poem which creates poetic feelings..One can perhaps question.. Mae aadaraya .. mulin sinanwakwee...pasuwa susumak wunadei kiyaa..." THANKS FOR THE POEM. RAMU
yeah..yeah..its obviously true nands.. cos..time can heal a heart,if it has every broken pieces.. isnt it??...so keep it up nands..no words for express it..simply ur da best..(if im notin da contest)buhah..ha..ha..
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This poem creates contradictory feelings which one could argue in different ways.."Sinnasee waetunu kandulu viyalee giyapasu..susumak ithiri wuuye aei..?" This laugh has not been real..if it is real, how can there be a " Susumak" at the end... Laugh at the lover.. laugh at oneself.. laugh at the detiny...? whatever, I found something new and something hidden in this poem which creates poetic feelings..One can perhaps question.. Mae aadaraya .. mulin sinanwakwee...pasuwa susumak wunadei kiyaa..."
THANKS FOR THE POEM.
RAMU
hmmm... susumakin kelawara wena bawath denagena widapu adarayak....
lassanai akkee..
nangi oyage kavi harima lassanai. Oya mata ewana mails wala thibunu ewath mama thiyagena inne. Sindu deka thunak karanna adahasak nedda? Ehema kauruhari illuwoth mewagen denawata oya kemathida?
Santhosai digatama liyanna nangi.
BUDU SARANAI !
yeah..yeah..its obviously true nands..
cos..time can heal a heart,if it has every broken pieces..
isnt it??...so keep it up nands..no words for express it..simply ur da best..(if im notin da contest)buhah..ha..ha..
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