Yes, this can be rated as another good poem which cretaes some sensations and related CHITTA RUUPA. And the reader could apply himself or herself to the world that the poet has brought through this poem and enjoy the wordings.
However, 2nd verse could be further improved I hope. Best Wishes KANCHANA..
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Yes, this can be rated as another good poem which cretaes some sensations and related CHITTA RUUPA. And the reader could apply himself or herself to the world that the poet has brought through this poem and enjoy the wordings.
However, 2nd verse could be further improved I hope. Best Wishes KANCHANA..
laga hitiya nam iitath wada adaraya karanna thibba neda samaharawita....
lassanai akke kaviya
කාන්ච් ගේ මේ කවිය මම මීට කලින් කියවලා තියනවදත් මන්දා. හරිම ලස්සනයි..
@ramu
Thanx Mr.Ramu...
@malee
e wunata dura idan karana adareth amuthu kalawak thiyenawa...nadda man ahanne :D :P
@haresh
කවි මැසිම ?? :D e mokakda e? ow "durin hida oba desa balannam" wage thamai...:D
@boman
ow oya meka kiyawala athi EK eken...tikak parana ekak...
Hmmmmmmmm...well..i think its more o less happend to every one..though i suppose it wsnt regardin your experience...nice poem nands..
harim alasanai saralai.. eth kathwanum digai...
iwasapan papuwoo kiyala innai thiyenne..;(
Huummm Harima lassani Kanchh
Kohomath aradere karaddi ehema thama neda
Digatama liayanna api maga baln innawa
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